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Hector
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2!  Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 5:21 pm |
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works but what is the "thing" just about half way up his arm, can't make it out, also it's distracting to the eye.
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Paulo
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 5:32 pm |
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Good spot, Hector. I think that's the ammo clip for the gun that Rick forgot to erase 
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Hector
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 5:33 pm |
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Paulo wrote: Good spot, Hector. I think that's the ammo clip for the gun that Rick forgot to erase oki doki... 
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Paulo
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 5:35 pm |
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But if I juxtapose both images, I'm not so sure.   Also, I would keep the web strand in the original.
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 5:40 pm |
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yeah something is up...donno what that is...
the moon placement was better in the top one.
I agree on web strand also...
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Rick Hannah
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 5:46 pm |
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It's such a cliche pose. I should have listened to my teeny inner voice about the gun. I certainly would have drawn another figure and built around that. Impossible now without drawing the whole thing again. I actually broke down and tried it.
Feh.
So I guess I'm stuck with it.
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Rick Hannah
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 5:47 pm |
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Hector wrote: yeah something is up...donno what that is...
the moon placement was better in the top one.
I agree on web strand also... I had to move the moon over to compensate for the lack of gun.
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Rick Hannah
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 5:48 pm |
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Hector wrote: Paulo wrote: Good spot, Hector. I think that's the ammo clip for the gun that Rick forgot to erase oki doki... Belt for the trench coat.
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Rick Hannah
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 5:50 pm |
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Rick Hannah wrote: Hector wrote: yeah something is up...donno what that is...
the moon placement was better in the top one.
I agree on web strand also... I had to move the moon over to compensate for the lack of gun. Although it may be over TOO far....
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Hector
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 5:52 pm |
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Rick Hannah wrote: Hector wrote: yeah something is up...donno what that is...
the moon placement was better in the top one.
I agree on web strand also... I had to move the moon over to compensate for the lack of gun. your losing the silhouette I suggest moving the moon back... also lose the belt... the figure without the gun is working fine... up to you tho...
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Rick Hannah
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 6:01 pm |
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Better? 
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 6:01 pm |
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He looks like he has a cane.
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Paulo
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 10:21 pm |
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Just change the strand to look more strandy.
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2015 1:47 am |
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Naw, I can't unsee it now. If it's not looking like a cane, it's looking like a whip or a candycane. It's out. I'm going with Hector saying the figure is fine. I'm going to cling to that.
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Hector
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2015 1:51 am |
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Question: are you using levels?
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Rick Hannah
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2015 2:29 am |
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Hector wrote: Question: are you using levels? Layers, you mean?
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2015 2:42 am |
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Rick Hannah wrote: Hector wrote: Question: are you using levels? Layers, you mean? yeah, I donno what soft your using, if it's Photoshop then Layers...
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Rick Hannah
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2015 6:25 am |
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Hector wrote: Rick Hannah wrote: Hector wrote: Question: are you using levels? Layers, you mean? yeah, I donno what soft your using, if it's Photoshop then Layers... Hell, yes, I'm using layers (Photoshop). That's why I said thank God for digital art. I can change all this stuff without a nervous breakdown.
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2015 6:29 am |
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Further talk is moot. Sent off this version. Done is done. 
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Evans
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2015 9:20 am |
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Boring but true
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Edit: Forget it - I didn't see that you'd already sent it!
Last edited by Evans on Wed Sep 02, 2015 9:22 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Evans
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2015 9:21 am |
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Boring but true
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But I think it's a great composition, by the way! Really striking and 'noir.'
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Hector
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Post subject: T-Shirt Challenges 2! Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2015 10:30 am |
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Rick Hannah wrote: Hector wrote: Rick Hannah wrote: Hector wrote: Question: are you using levels? Layers, you mean? yeah, I donno what soft your using, if it's Photoshop then Layers... Hell, yes, I'm using layers (Photoshop). That's why I said thank God for digital art. I can change all this stuff without a nervous breakdown. Um...about HELL tis a very nice place...good luck. Also I notice you are very critical about yourself and your work... TOO much MIND... then again whats DONE cannot be undone... oh well. or as I would say to my Homies take a chill pill bro...
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